作文一些做法类的其实可以模仿阅读原文来改写,比如说我记得有一年文章里有关环境保护的,是“To be sure, the environmental pollution does arouse increasing concern. But concern alone is deficient. If those in charge will not take legislative initiative, the society should have to institute conservation measures. Only when we serve as responsible stewards of the planet/society, could our home be in environmentally sound and the life be spiritually enjoyable.如果考自然环境可以直接要用,考别的也可以进行改写,比如:On my personal level, the optimistic energy must be promoted. To be sure, the XXX(dearth of confidence among a host of people) does arouse increasing concern. But concern alone is deficient. If those in charge will not take legislative initiative, the school should have to institute conservation measures. Only when we give weight to XXX, could our mind be in comprehensively mature and the life be in spiritually enjoyable. 这样至少能保证自己的用法相对地道,我看了下网上部分老师的作文书,真的是结构都很牵强。